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daily-finds.log.md

@@ -3769,3 +3769,9 @@ Fact-check: **no corrections to the find — it held up — with the muralist an
 - **Deliberately not asserted:** the muralist and the year. No source (Wikipedia, NSF, palmerstation.com, or Atlas Obscura's own listing) names either, so the review says so rather than inventing one. It does anchor the mural in time with sourced, dated details instead: the station archive notes it as unchanged through a fuel-tank cleaning project completed December 2012, and a February 2013 whale-tagging team is on record calling the painted orca anatomically incorrect.
 - Visitor access stated honestly: a working research base, not a tourist stop — no regular public access; only a handful of expedition ships are cleared to call in a given season (a 2016 account cites nine, with arranged guided walks ashore).
 ~393-word body (narrative-subject allowance; well under the ceiling — the honest story is short and was not padded). Amazon: n/a (a place).
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+## 2026-07-23 — copy edit
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+Fresh-eyes pass (sonnet subagent, per `TEAM.md`) over this run's 36 new/modified pieces: 32 find bodies, 1 bundle blurb+intro, 3 review bodies. **1 changed, 35 left alone.** Conductor reviewed the diff — the single edit cut a generic, redundant closing sentence and touched no fact, name, price, link, or claim, so nothing was reverted.
+- `outlier-futurelittlebigs` — dropped the closing "It's built for a fit that's loose without ever feeling baggy," which restated the opening's "roomy fit" with no new specific; body now ends on the concrete pocket/waistband detail (54 words, in budget).
+The three reviews' fact-check corrections and honest caveats (RGM's Swiss movement / not-entirely-American-made note, Kodak-vs-Reto licensing, the orca mural's undocumented muralist and the anatomically-incorrect note) were checked intact and unsoftened. The three dad-joke bodies were left verbatim (the joke text is a claim, not prose to tighten).

src/content/find/2026/07/outlier-futurelittlebigs/index.mdx

@@ -10,4 +10,4 @@ tags: [shorts, technical-fabric, activewear]
 description: "A 6-inch-inseam short in Outlier's 200gsm Futurecloth nylon/elastane, with an inside/outside waist adjust and four draining, breathable powermesh pockets."
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-Outlier cuts this 6-inch-inseam short from its own Futurecloth, a 200gsm nylon/elastane blend with roughly 35% two-way stretch, so the roomy fit still moves like a running short. A waistband adjusts from both inside and outside, and all four pockets are powermesh, built to drain water and let air through rather than trap it. It's built for a fit that's loose without ever feeling baggy.
+Outlier cuts this 6-inch-inseam short from its own Futurecloth, a 200gsm nylon/elastane blend with roughly 35% two-way stretch, so the roomy fit still moves like a running short. A waistband adjusts from both inside and outside, and all four pockets are powermesh, built to drain water and let air through rather than trap it.