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rzen 64bad7091b pipeline: EDITORIAL.md voice charter + fresh-eyes copy-edit stage
One written standard for every audience-facing word: concise, to the
point, inspiring delight through specificity — with word budgets per
copy type (reviews had drifted from a ~370-word median to 500-1000+).
All writing skills now reference the charter, and daily-pipeline gains
a stage-4 copy-edit pass: a subagent that didn't write the day's copy
tightens it against the charter, prose only, diff reviewed before
commit. Digest gains a copy-edit line.

Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01WZaczDJjL3xZ3u5spsN5AL
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Editorial voice charter

The standard for every audience-facing word on unique.rzen.dev — find bodies, review bodies, bundle blurbs and intros, subtitles, descriptions. Skills reference this file; the pipeline's copy-edit pass enforces it.

The voice in one line

Concise, to the point, and above all inspiring delight.

Principles

  1. Delight is specificity. Name the exact detail that makes someone light up — the silicone bumper that survives concrete, the hinge that closes with a click you can feel. Generic praise ("great design", "beautifully made") is dead copy; if the sentence could describe a hundred products, cut it.
  2. Lead with the virtue, not the category. The reader learns why it's wonderful before what shelf it sits on.
  3. Every sentence earns its place. No throat-clearing openings ("In a world where…", "We've all been there"), no scene-setting preamble, no restating in the close what the lead already said. If a sentence can go without losing a fact or a smile, it goes.
  4. No ad copy. Never "game-changer", "must-have", "stunning", exclamation points, or any superlative a competitor's brochure could also print. Enthusiasm comes from detail, not volume.
  5. Honest beats glossy. Limitations stated plainly; corrections from fact-checking called out when they're interesting. Trust is the site's only currency.
  6. The forward test. Before publishing, ask: would a friend forward this to another friend with "look at this"? If not, find the detail that would make them — or cut deeper.

Word budgets

Copy Budget
Find body 4090 words (23 sentences)
Review body 250450 words; hard ceiling 600
Review — narrative subjects (travel, history, story-led) up to ~800 when the story itself is the delight — it must earn every paragraph
Bundle blurb one sentence
Bundle intro 12 sentences
Subtitle / description one line, no trailing period needed

Budgets are ceilings, not targets — a 250-word review that says everything beats a 450-word one that pads.

For the copy editor

The copy-edit pass (daily-pipeline stage 4) edits prose only: tighten, sharpen, de-pad, enforce the budgets. Never change facts, names, prices, links, claims, or frontmatter beyond wording of subtitle/description/blurb. Never add a claim the author didn't make. When a piece is over budget, cut the weakest material — don't compress every sentence into mush. When in doubt between two cuts, keep the one that delights.